I read the first sample essay. I thought that the presentation of the ideas were in a good order. By the end of the essay, I was agreeing that the hosts should be getting part of the servers’ tips. The examples of other people getting part of the waiters’ tips also helped persuade me into feeling that the hosts should get more money. The description of what a host actually does helped because I had no idea that they did so many things to help the restaurant and the servers.
The calculation of money was probably the most effective part of the article. When the author suggested that 1% of the tips should go to the host, I thought that seemed like a lot of money, but once the calculations were made I was able to see that it didn’t make that much difference for the servers. What it really did was help the hosts out a lot. The difference in overall amount of money that a server got versus the host was amazing. The entire article grabbed my attention and persuaded me very quickly, so I would say that the article was very effective.
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